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My first writers' conference/retreat was in 2002. I'd written a whole lot of words before then, but I'd never studied writing craft, which meant that I used the components, but couldn't name them. So when the freelance editor who reviewed my scene asked, "Whose point of view is this in?" I cocked my head, confused by the question. She continued, "You know. Whose head are we in? Whose point of view?" I thought this over for about five seconds and replied with what I felt was the perfectly obvious reply. "Well, the same point of view all my stories are written in. Kimberly's point of view." I'm sure she thought, Oh Boy.
I saw myself as the invisible narrator, telling the reader what a particular character was thinking and feeling and doing in each scene. After all, if we were truly in a character's point of view, why would the character be thinking of him or herself in third person? If I'm relating a story about something that happened to me, I don't say, "Kimberly parked her silver convertible under the tree's canopy and then..." I'll say, "I parked my car under the tree and then..."
In real life, only eccentrics, egomaniacs, and a few foreign dictators (who probably fall into one of the first two categories anyway) go around referring to themselves in third person. But in books, while there can be an all-knowing narrator, more often the convention is to write about characters in the third person from the character's point of view. Except, that is, for books that are written in "first person."



